Look at the sky where the birds are flying.
Can you see the black one inbetween the white.
They fly away into a land we don't know.
They spread their wings and fly away.
Look at the grass, it's so wonderful and green.
Sit down and feel it... it feels like wool.
Why? I don't know, my feelings are different than yours.
Sitting in the grass, looking at the sky.
Raindrops are falling down on earth.
Because of the rain you cannot see my teardrops in my face.
They mix with the raindrops that come down from my hair.
Walking through the woods..
i can't see the wood because of the many trees.
The sun glitters on the bottom of the wood.
The sunbeam shines through the branches.
I lay down on the floor and watched the animals
which live in the wood. I heard a song in my i-pod
the song is called: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XMCUg1J8nuI
I closed my eyes. I dream MY dream.
The sun blinds me. I feel good. I like it.
Suddenly some raindrops fall down on my nose.
I scared. I jumped up. I saw that the rain is getting stronger.
I put my cap on my head and run back home.
I like this feeling... to be free!
to be continued...
(bitte nicht allzu kritisch sein, falls sich gramatikalisch/rechtschreiberisch ein paar - hoffentlich nicht viele - Fehler eingeschlichen haben, i try to get better ;-))
Can you see the black one inbetween the white.
They fly away into a land we don't know.
They spread their wings and fly away.
Look at the grass, it's so wonderful and green.
Sit down and feel it... it feels like wool.
Why? I don't know, my feelings are different than yours.
Sitting in the grass, looking at the sky.
Raindrops are falling down on earth.
Because of the rain you cannot see my teardrops in my face.
They mix with the raindrops that come down from my hair.
Walking through the woods..
i can't see the wood because of the many trees.
The sun glitters on the bottom of the wood.
The sunbeam shines through the branches.
I lay down on the floor and watched the animals
which live in the wood. I heard a song in my i-pod
the song is called: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XMCUg1J8nuI
I closed my eyes. I dream MY dream.
The sun blinds me. I feel good. I like it.
Suddenly some raindrops fall down on my nose.
I scared. I jumped up. I saw that the rain is getting stronger.
I put my cap on my head and run back home.
I like this feeling... to be free!
to be continued...
(bitte nicht allzu kritisch sein, falls sich gramatikalisch/rechtschreiberisch ein paar - hoffentlich nicht viele - Fehler eingeschlichen haben, i try to get better ;-))
Hallo Babs..
AntwortenLöschenI follow your Blog and I am worried.
Please change the opening picture. It is not good to chase a phantom. You ar a very bright lovely young woman and much too good for this kind of unfulfillable love.
The poem is very good and spelling errors are truly unimportant. (It is "spread not "spraid.")
Greetings... Bert
You don't have to be worried *big hug*
AntwortenLöschenI don't know which opening picture you mean? Do you mean the song? I like this song. I know that the love, i call it "Schwärmerei" is unfulfillable. Thx for the Assessment, but please tell me if the "Satzstellung" and the Vocabular is so strange, that the sentence has no sense. *g Lovely greets, Babs